- It is very very good!
- I think its good okay you want a cookie.
- Very Romantic, hits the heart, sounds like the guy is awesome, but has a scary past, or something demonic in his mind. A bit too much on the blood part. The rest is really quite creative. The lucky lady, or guy is just that. Although I would definitely run the other way after reading this about your past. GL and Gb
- this makes me cry cuz it sounds like i wrote this cuz its just how i feel with my life. this is so touching. i hope you do not mind i want to print this to show to my husband cuz i couldnt have said it any better
- That is a really good story. I reminds me of so many little grils who had a hard life. They all deserve to find happiness
- Wow- It’s a remarkable work. Very compelling. Usually I don’t go for the totally emotional outpourings without much imagery but this is so much better than most. Thank you for sharing it.
- That is a really amazing! I love it. It is so sad and heartwrenching, i never use that word but now… i have to, that is just a really really amazing sad poem, but at the same time, i love it! Good Job:)
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